The human race has really screwed things up. The economy is non-existent, crime is rampant, everyone is starving, the world is on the brink...
...this is when the Supremacy steps in. They are a group with enormous power. They have fed the masses, eliminated crime, housed, clothed and provided jobs to everyone. They saved humanity – it’s just too bad the human race didn't know at the time that it meant they would become slaves with no hope of a future or freedom from their "Keepers".
It started off fantastic. The first five or so chapters were a whirlwind of info. It was very exciting, but then:
- The spelling errors started to become a little more apparent. The most predominant error was with a character named Brian. The name Brian cannot be spelled b-r-a-i-n. Being not just an error but an independent word, it is noticed immediately. Since it was spelled incorrectly about half the time the name was mentioned, it totally removed me from the story (I wish the 20-something generation would either learn how to spell or at least learn that spell-check doesn’t always put in the correct word).
- The conversations with the characters became a little less fluid and didn’t always make sense.
- Then (and this is the worst part), it became a soap opera. Yup, this book should only be read mid-afternoon. In classic soap opera fashion, we find out the main characters are related and yet falling in love. The step-mother was really the aunt, was married to one of their fathers and now married to the other father…. Frankly, it is a family to which you cannot draw the tree. It is more of a family tumbleweed.
I would still recommend this book – it does have an interesting story. I was torn between a three and a four star rating but being a newbie author, I have to give a little additional credit. The first is the worst. It’s just too bad that the author didn’t bother to find someone to edit this book properly. Without a good editor, a potentially incredible story is only mediocre.